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Beginning sent on September 09, 2016 (10:28) by Raffasky. 16 comments, 550 views. [retina]

at 40mm, 1/1250 f/5.0, ISO 100, hand held.

Questa barca in uscita da porto. Mi sarebbe piaciuto rendere l'idea dell'inizio del viaggio, cioè nel senso di ottimismo per nuovi orizzonti.



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avatarsenior
sent on September 09, 2016 (11:26) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

It seems to me the return ... seen looking into port ... so sad :-D
However there is too much space under the remainder of the composition is buona..con Photoshop would leave only the boat and the lighthouse after which I would do at Juventus ... I would be so much better ... cmq is a personal opinion the photo so too is bellina ....

avatarsenior
sent on September 09, 2016 (11:32) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Well ... from the point of view of the composition nothing to say, all the elements of interest are in the right place (and the horizon is straight, which is not cheap).
Perhaps there is too much sharpening, I see halos (after a discussion with Maserc on this issue are not sure that this is not the conversion made by the site to upload the image; it would seem not because even on high resolution are obvious).
I also find it a bit off in general, both in chroma level (but there is little to do) that the brightness and contrast.
We are working on it a little you could definitely improve.
Minimal to suggest a minimal b / n with more contrast and structure.
The subject for me is of little interesbut if it is a totally subjective assessment, who loves the sea it will certainly take a different view.

avatarjunior
sent on September 09, 2016 (11:45) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

As they stated perhaps too much under the sea (maybe I cut into 4-5 cm under the boat) and perhaps too tight the sky above, the antenna (or whatever his name) is just flush with the edge. There are also some halos and "strange" colors on the pier and on the horizon.
hello and good trip :-D

avatarsenior
sent on September 09, 2016 (12:25) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Hello. I raised a hair framing in mo do not get the tip extreme right on the edge (the terminal antenna almost touches the edge) and as mentioned by others I cut a little 'under the sea. Great suggestion of black and white, to prove.

avatarjunior
sent on September 09, 2016 (13:47) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

A sincere thanks to all the constructive comments.
I tried to put them into practice, however, the horizon happens right in the middle, and I wanted to avoid the impression of static.
Now also the place for a confrontation, even desaturating much, to the BN limit, but without getting there.
If you can tell me what you think
@ Ales5a78, no is out looking, in fact green is left!
:-D
:-D

avatarsenior
sent on September 09, 2016 (14:16) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

: - /

avatarsupporter
sent on September 09, 2016 (15:15) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Hello Raffa is a bit 'I have not heard you, I would put the tree of sailing on the third I see it too in the corner, cut off a bit' even under, the good idea ...

user81257
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sent on September 09, 2016 (16:58) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The composition is good, maybe a lower pdr would also give depth to the shot.
The sharpness seems to me excessive, some disturbing element too in my view (the other boats), there is some problem of fire or kneading of the image, do not understand, there are a few little points legible.
But the biggest problem is the drive mode, meaning: what did you mean? The beginning? Then exit in the bank? To me it does not communicate this message, it seems to me a simple boat ride, that's all.
Marco.

avatarjunior
sent on September 09, 2016 (19:42) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Hi Andrea,
I always follow, but I had no more desire to post because I always seemed too anonymous.

Thanks Mark
in effect to what I wanted to make I did not go very close,
the boat is leaving the harbor, and has all the sea front
(Apart from those two str .. with the speedboat that are put in the middle :-D)

I'd like to make that began a sailing offshore, something new and unexplored, in short, not easy, not even to explain!

If you can take a look also to the other?

user81257
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sent on September 10, 2016 (8:43) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The problem is that the photographs are bounded by the frame in a given space. This means that those who come to look at them, must be able to understand the message just from that small frame. You must know the overall situation.
In this case, for those who like me knows nothing of the harbor and boats, it is difficult to understand that this ship is leaving the port. Indeed, I see in the port towards the cliff, so it looks like he's coming back.
Any problem there.
Marco.

avatarsenior
sent on September 10, 2016 (8:44) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The photo is nice for composition and sharpness, but I find that too harsh light penalize shooting.
David

avatarsenior
sent on September 10, 2016 (19:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

3E

avatarsenior
sent on September 10, 2016 (22:07) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Hello Raffasky, I'll be honest, the trip is not my thing, and I will explain why: the composition is ok, especially the boat position, then "compositionally" talking you did a good job, however, the picture is weak, does not communicate much, and this is the biggest problem. Even the title is difficult to reduce to what you see.
First, the color will not be any added value, so better to delete it; a good conversion into the bn would surely have appreciated. And because it's a very "geometrical" snap, I cloned the two boats that give a sense of the -scatto Sunday- and distract the observer.
In this way, surely he would have hit more.


avatarsenior
sent on September 11, 2016 (8:36) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Technically nothing to say, I find there is too much sea .... I would leave more space to the sky during shooting (sleeping too cut above the shaft of the boat).
Idea good base but because of this I will propose a conversion in b / n in order to give more charge to a scene it is beautiful but very quiet.

user81826
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sent on September 12, 2016 (9:33) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

It performed well technically it seems although the elaboration of the sky leaves much to be desired, in the sense that we would see more good lights.
Even the shadows would open a little more.
The trigger fundamental problem is that the moment caught is not very interesting; there is plenty of room for the sea but without a precise function, the depth is not much represented since there are no foreground subjects which post with what is behind and the light does not seem particularly well in anything.
For me you can do an excellent shooting by choosing a better time for another day.

avatarjunior
sent on September 12, 2016 (15:24) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thank you all for the comments
@ Maserc, even hard ones are welcome! in fact the halos speech is right
It is that I have to learn how to do the PP

but also take a look at the other version?



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