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rackets...

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rackets sent on October 04, 2016 (19:52) by Raffasky. 25 comments, 587 views. [retina]

, 1/500 f/9.0, ISO 100, hand held. Roma, Italy.




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avatarsenior
sent on October 06, 2016 (19:36) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I am distressed to comment on this picture, however, I try. We have a threatening sky and a rough sea which already alone could be valued in an interesting shot. The addition of the two people on the beach playing (they are very small and in the shade) seems more an annoyance than a value added in the photo. It might seem that they are playing heedless of the storm coming, however, to make more this idea, it would be appropriate to resume closer trying to capture the expression of the faces.

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sent on October 06, 2016 (20:37) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Hello, interesting shot. I definitely like the composition, a little 'less than the color of the sky that I find too cold in relation to earth. As noted by Nicola, I too find the two people too small

avatarsenior
sent on October 06, 2016 (20:47) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

very interesting the sky, the two types but they play rackets are a little 'small and defiladed, are almost a nuisance in this photo. I agree with Nicholas.

avatarsupporter
sent on October 06, 2016 (21:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The idea was good, the background was intriguing, the composition is not 'up to the rest. : - |
But keep account of the idea, here you have dropped the subject in the next try to place them in the most convenient location. ;-)

avatarsenior
sent on October 06, 2016 (21:31) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The leaden sky looming, who rightly have left a lot of space, is very impressive. There is something wrong in the two playing heedless of what is about to happen ... It's probably laying not particularly elegant. The idea in itself is not bad, put there in the corner, although for better convey the sense of isolation I would have included a hair more than the beach.

avatarsenior
sent on October 06, 2016 (22:49) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I find very interesting photo ... as you were told over the idea there is heaven there is no beach there and the two racchettari there are ... what I think is not good is the composition .. .d'accordo which is a beautiful sky but it is too present in the frame, in proportion there is very little beach and the two players rackets are very small considering the title :-D

avatarsenior
sent on October 06, 2016 (22:59) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I like it, but I can only give reason to those who suggested to give more weight to the two characters.
The contrast sky - I really like the sea

avatarsenior
sent on October 07, 2016 (7:48) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Yet remember that in some manual dialing was said just that to give prominence to something small to 'inside of something great, it was recommended to place the small image to one end of the act.

For me excellent photos.

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sent on October 07, 2016 (9:18) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Definitely an original composition, not everyone compose in this way, it takes courage, mint and very open eye.
So a good for the composition.
But the picture does not shine because I can not find anything interesting.
The laying of the players (at least one of the two) is ugly, the file has not been working very well, it is true that you do not have a professional equipment, but that goal has very different sharpness compared to what I see.
Say you're on the right track, but in addition to well-made, the photo should also be interesting.
Marco.

avatarjunior
sent on October 07, 2016 (10:00) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thank you all
especially for the encouragement ;-)
I took the 50cc, I had only to that day, as I often actually.

The idea was just to make the disproportion between the players and the surrounding nature
that day on the beach there were only them, heedless of the storm approaching, and I was raised the idea of ??making their own how small we are faced with certain events.
Perhaps in a larger project. For now I just opened a new personal gallery
who knows.

Thank you

@Arci Have recognized the PDR?

avatarsenior
sent on October 07, 2016 (10:41) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I would have cut a bit 'of the sky, bringing out more subjects left. Postproduz. to be improved, it seems flattened with a forced addition of sharpness as if it were triggered at high ISO, but I see actually that iso port 100. I wonder if the pdr was more distnte and then cropped. for the rest, very good color.

avatarsenior
sent on October 07, 2016 (11:18) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The subjects are a little too marginal and did not understand what I wanted to say, the atmosphere is dramatic but the subject is playful, unconcerned, though I did not understand what you wanted to tell us. In any case I would have approached me a little more because so are quite insignificant compared to the frame so as to appear "disturbing elements"

avatarsenior
sent on October 07, 2016 (12:27) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

A bit 'sacrificed the beach and the location of the players.
Sacrificed to a sky not so varied.
Good side light.
A more accurate composition would have appreciated.

avatarjunior
sent on October 07, 2016 (15:29) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thank you
@ Yoctox you in fact I made a crop, about 15%, and the sharpness has lost

@Lenza: In fact I really wanted to highlight the indifference of the players against the coming storm, sometimes we are so insignificant, yet careless, than what surrounds us

thanks Maserc I'm working on "Composition"

avatarsenior
sent on October 08, 2016 (13:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)


avatarsenior
sent on October 08, 2016 (16:13) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I find two things that I do not end up in this beautiful shot: the shadows a bit 'too closed on people and subjects a bit' too much at the margin: I moved to the left the shot to put them on the third of the left and create a diagonal slightly 'longer with the shoreline.

avatarjunior
sent on October 09, 2016 (8:00) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Good idea to tell about the incongruity between the game and the storm coming, but really the figures are too far apart and the space for the perhaps excessive sky.
I would be closer to the players and PP would have made even more dramatic heaven.

Hello,

Bruno

avatarsupporter
sent on October 09, 2016 (14:30) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Excuse the late reply ... I recognized you my gym sea.
That stretch of beach is a project of mine that goes on for years and it's nice to photograph it at different times of the year, do it yourself is a good gym. ;-)

avatarsenior
sent on October 09, 2016 (15:08) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

My predecessor expressed most of my criticisms :-D
The cloudy sky and light are the highlight of the photos, what you do not like is the composition. If you want to add a human element to a landscape photograph, you have to give it a more prominent ;-)
David

avatarjunior
sent on October 09, 2016 (15:08) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

very interesting the sky, the biggest problem is the composition, the two people playing rackets should be much closer to the lens.
You may want to try a color change b / n ;-)


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