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pink shadows...

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pink shadows sent on January 03, 2017 (10:51) by Raffasky. 40 comments, 731 views. [retina]

at 189mm, 1/500 f/4.0, ISO 200, hand held.




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user81826
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sent on January 03, 2017 (11:06) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

It's a nice picture because you've cut all that was possible to cut and in that sense is original.
It's kind of a collage composition with the human element that blends with all the other details such as the reflection on the window with cable, colors, interesting shadows and so on.
A brave shot that I like but technically the raddrizzerei undoubtedly aumenterei and lights to give brightness. Definitely not a masterpiece but you watch

avatarjunior
sent on January 03, 2017 (11:54) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thanks Paul,
I tried to straighten it as much as possible, but I managed.

user75655
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sent on January 03, 2017 (13:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

You see that you've looked for a composition based on rectangles. The idea is good but in practice does not convince me because in these rectangles chaos reigns. Too many elements within them that relegate women into the background the human subject. If I were you I would look for a place "cleaner" to try this type of composition. The title also find the little spot on as the pink shades you mention do not catch my eye and I think are not even so pink.

avatarsenior
sent on January 03, 2017 (13:54) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I am not convinced at all the person at the bottom right part of the cut and I cut out the top under the veranda on the right, however a nice picture even for the well-assorted colors.

avatarjunior
sent on January 03, 2017 (15:02) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Hello NievesY,
you've tried this composition on rectangles, then, as already I mentioned by Paul, I should at least clone the cable that you see on the right
I learned only this morning as you use the clone stamp 8-)
The Human Figure cut is another flaw, surely,
certain automatism I still have not acquired them
Thank you

user75655
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sent on January 03, 2017 (15:33) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Quiet, I clone stamp, I learned to use it two weeks ago s I still do damage :-D :-D

avatarsenior
sent on January 03, 2017 (15:38) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

It 'definitely a shot with good potential and interesting as a basic idea. But there are, in my opinion, too many items at once. The human presence there may be, but it is badly cut. Ditto for the flowered balcony on the upper right and the windows on the left side. In my monitor shadows are more orange than pink, but I find it very nice to play different tones you've caught. I think you should try to try different cuts eliminating the superfluous, the composition can improve a lot.

avatarjunior
sent on January 03, 2017 (15:41) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thanks Gigga
I thought I did, that I thought I had already eliminated the superfluous in this shot,
obviously not enough!

avatarsenior
sent on January 03, 2017 (17:00) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Hello Raffasky I like the idea but not much its realization. There were enough geometric elements can make it very interesting shot, but unfortunately they are all cut, if it is a conscious rebellion against a certain formality in the street as a genre I can also share but not enough, I would have chosen or the two windows cut or loop . Greetings

avatarsenior
sent on January 03, 2017 (17:10) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

geometries are not bad even the color I do not mind, there are some elements in the composition that penalize the final result. There could also be a version B & W. The wall in the foreground and the lady did not see them in focus as the wall in the background

avatarsenior
sent on January 03, 2017 (20:40) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

For me it is a very good picture .... nice location for photos of this kind ... I like ... What advice would cut to eliminate the green envelope ... Whereas the feet do not have them now taken ... but the best suggestion is to use this place waiting for a subject more interesting ...
I do not want the girl :-D

avatarsenior
sent on January 03, 2017 (22:19) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I like it!!!
It presents minor faults, the guy I'd cut slightly more top without showing the hand and little bag but holding it absolutely in the picture.
Some line seems a little crooked as that of the wall
In however great job overall

avatarsenior
sent on January 04, 2017 (11:09) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Why cut the legs to the human subject?
Also I think it hangs slightly to the right. I would make more brilliant yellow / green bag so as to make it more visible and detach from the prevailing pink.

avatarsenior
sent on January 04, 2017 (11:17) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I tried it and I like it more aesthetically with no visible legs, makes me even more abstract pictures, then little bag I do not like that color in my jars

avatarjunior
sent on January 04, 2017 (12:27) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

3E
So thank you very much for the advice, of which I will treasure!

avatarsenior
sent on January 04, 2017 (14:11) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Personally, I like the photo! I like the composition, geometry and especially the colors ... you know the one thing that does not work: the person! Cut, uncut ... the green envelope, I do not know, I even I would have tried to clone it! :-D

avatarjunior
sent on January 04, 2017 (15:22) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thanks Razor,
remove it distorts a little the way I looked for the snap :-D

avatarsenior
sent on January 04, 2017 (15:25) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

different views, I think the person does photography.
Without the geometry remain, but you lose the subject, I would miss something that gives meaning and step force.
It could almost be a horizontal cutting or even eliminating the square in the upper right cut planters

avatarjunior
sent on January 04, 2017 (15:41) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Yes
I agree fully.
without the human figure is a far cry
It does not belong to me
Thank you

avatarsenior
sent on January 04, 2017 (17:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Yes, there I'd put the "face" on purpose because I see a shot that had great potential and was in my opinion strongly penalized by the person cutting. If I also included a few cm in the pavement it would have been a completely different picture!


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