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Window on the gulf sent on October 05, 2017 (9:26) by Raffasky. 20 comments, 341 views. [retina]

, 1/40 f/2.8, ISO 400, hand held.

Come spesso succede, rivedendo la pp dopo qualche giorno, mi accorgo di aver cannato il bilanciamento del bianco e così ne posto una ulteriore versione. Grazie per le critiche, soprattutto alla composizione



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avatarjunior
sent on October 19, 2017 (19:38) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

nice idea, the whole picture I like but there is something in the composition that does not convince me. Perhaps I would straighten the window, table it or cut it completely or it should have more visibility, just as it looks like a distraction.

avatarsenior
sent on October 19, 2017 (19:55) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

As already mentioned, the idea is interesting.
The composition does not mind me or even the pdr, but I do not mind the lights at all, I might have tried with a larger iso sensitivity since your 6d is ok. You would of course climb above 1/40 (positive) and even more with the lights. Hope the family dinner was serene :-P a Raffy hug!
Kev.

user81257
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sent on October 19, 2017 (20:03) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The idea is also interesting, but you have a light problem.
The subject (bottles and glasses) are in shadow as light comes from the background and, for the sake of things, tends to look at them.

avatarsupporter
sent on October 19, 2017 (20:28) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

But the note on the note? ahaha stroke of genius !!! You have post-booked the XD table
cmq, jokes apart!
I really like it, it looks like one of those photos you find on the furniture / houses / rooms / magazines I know.
It's true the eye drops a lot out there, but I think it's also yours, right raffa?
otherwise you would not have left enough space to the window and so little at the table and the room.
I like the room to be illumined, from ideas of intimacy, candlelight dinner.
I also like the blue reflexes on the glasses

avatarsenior
sent on October 19, 2017 (22:15) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Great for both composition and atmosphere ... nice also the presence of the reserved name :-D.
I would see the reverse line up, considering that the bottom is almost straight ...
And there is a fundamental thing that would make the difference ..... the candle lit and a bottle of wine ;-)

user72446
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sent on October 19, 2017 (23:59) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Nice idea, you could think of me playing with the shooting point. To see her looks a bit flat. Colors are pleasing. Relaxing atmosphere.

avatarsupporter
sent on October 20, 2017 (5:49) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

good idea, in my opinion it served more light on the table, to give the same more emphasis, also for a better reading of the whole set :-)

avatarjunior
sent on October 20, 2017 (8:46) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Lack of light, and oils and salons :-)

avatarjunior
sent on October 20, 2017 (9:28) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thanks for the welcome comments,
I'm glad the party was more or less appreciated, in fact the subject would not be the table, but the intimate dinner atmosphere I wanted to make: -)
For the falling lines I had noticed the divergence, but there was no way to dress them, I should pass it in photoshop and still do not understand how it is done.
The name on the note was a joke, thank you for noticing it 8-)
I asked the candle to the waiter, but there was no direction, the shot was not set up, I found the table so, some oil and saline I could hide though ;-)
Thank you all!

avatarsupporter
sent on October 20, 2017 (10:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Do not you just hide it? We are in Italy and a table set as you must have oil and vinegar above. It features the photo ... along with the wine glasses.

avatarjunior
sent on October 20, 2017 (10:34) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

in fact a point of view that has its why!
it would be great to put them in the middle less.

But why can not I get these nice considerations before the shot? : - /

avatarsenior
sent on October 20, 2017 (11:38) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

A nice photo, I agree with what Marco said ;-)
David

avatarjunior
sent on October 20, 2017 (22:06) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Subject and pdr are very good, the lights give me some doubts. I would have tried to have the background table brighter.

avatarjunior
sent on October 22, 2017 (18:16) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Nice picture, but with an illumination that does not value it, I would try to move the wb on tones a hottest pelina :)

avatarsenior
sent on October 23, 2017 (11:36) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

A pleasant memory with a good atmosphere, maybe if I had built the skydive I would have avoided the back of the back and that "blurry spot" on the left corner. But I think your intent was to just remember this moment ;-)

avatarjunior
sent on October 23, 2017 (14:26) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Yes, a memory photo, without too much pretense
even an attempt to make the atmosphere of a dinner a vacation!

thank you all

avatarsenior
sent on October 23, 2017 (15:01) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I really like the atmosphere created by the soft lights and the beautiful panorama in the distance. Nice composition, though I would have preferred that the coffee table be fully taken up. It would have been better to have a little more light on the table to give it more importance than the eye-catching landscape. I would cloned the leaves up in the center.

avatarjunior
sent on October 24, 2017 (18:47) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thank you Alex
the leaves are an unforgivable distraction in fact

avatarsenior
sent on October 26, 2017 (9:15) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Great idea, I really like the atmosphere, unfortunately it is a well thought picture, but a little less successful as a realization, congratulations however

avatarjunior
sent on October 26, 2017 (18:19) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thanks alessio :-D
Well thought-out: -D

small improvements,
It takes time,





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